Mr Judge Feedback - Provisional Mark/Level/Grade: Level 1: 7/20

In terms of an interim grade: Level 1 (7/20)

• Planning and research evidence will be incomplete; • There is minimal research into similar products and a potential target audience; • There is minimal organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props; • There is minimal work on shotlists, layouts, drafting, scripting or storyboarding; • There is minimal care in the presentation of the research and planning; • Time management may be very poor.

Medal: Since the last feedback you have added some new elements such the BFI analysis, script/synopsis, preliminary task assessment which has been a very good. Well done for those improvements: 

What we still need to add as (well as below) are:

• What is the downton abbey analysis on your blog, it is not part of this unit
• No Seven textual analysis
• images required on the maltese falcon analysis
• storyboard - require more images and explanations as to what the shots actually mean
• Mind mapping of initial ideas required
• images, that will help illuminate the points you are making.    

•  (Still to do) What we now need is to see is your evidence:
• for designing and creating studio logo's and your understanding of the correct conventional title orders as studied in class (Skyfall)
• Some images are also required to enhance the look and design your blog. 

Things tasks are an absolute must in order to get a good grade for coursework.

Please provide feedback, in the form of a new post, how and when you hope to achieve the tasks. 

	MINIMAL (L1)	BASIC (L2)	PROFICIENT (L3)	EXCELLENT (L4)	TOTAL
1.RESEARCH & PLANNING [20]	0-7	8-11	12-15	16-20	7/20
2. CONSTRUCTION – MAIN TASK [40]	0-23	24-35	36-47	48-60
3.EVALUATION [20]	0-7	8-11	12-15	16-20
TOTAL GRADE FOR FOUNDATION PORTFOLIO [100]					/100
Minus -39 = U	40-49 = E	50-59 = D	60-69 = C	70-79 = B	80-100 = A